Ice Lake

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Ice Lake

Postby Zipper » Sat Oct 10, 2015 8:04 am

yo what's up

here's my first ever(and probably last ever) SMBX level

it's decently sized and not TOO hard I hope

it also uses Lua for the boss battle, so if you're not using the lunalua builds, you're going to have a bad time.
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https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/396 ... 20Lake.zip

music used :
Lunate Elf, Touhou 6
...some cutscene song, I dunno what its name is, Touhou 13.5
Tomboyish Girl in Love, Touhou 6

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby PixelPest » Sat Oct 10, 2015 8:18 am

Yikes!!! There is a lot of clash and cutoff and it doesn't look good at all. The level looks like it's overall trying to be SMB3 styled so I'd look for some custom gfx for the arrow, the fences, and the interactive switch. I don't like the look of the mushroom stems and don't really understand their point. The fences are cutoff at all of their ends; delete the last piece on either side of the fence and replace it with the normal fence ends.

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby Zipper » Sat Oct 10, 2015 8:32 am

done, now you can give criticism AFTER playing the level

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby Mable » Sat Oct 10, 2015 8:55 am

Cosmik wrote:The level looks like it's overall trying to be SMB3 styled so I'd look for some custom gfx for the arrow, the fences, and the interactive switch.
Damn i didn't know that custom gfx make everything better. And lol people still use the word clash in 2k15.

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby MaK3eR » Sat Oct 10, 2015 9:06 pm

The Best in the world

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby Zeldamaster12 » Sat Oct 10, 2015 10:32 pm

MaK3eR wrote:The Best
Please be more constructive. What did and didn't you like about the level?

Don't double post either.

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby zlaker » Sat Oct 17, 2015 3:44 pm

So I played the level and I liked it. The ice to water gimmick was really cool. I can't say anything about the boss cuz I don't have the latest build Lua so yeah. Overall good job on the level!

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Re: Ice Lake

Postby glitch4 » Wed Nov 04, 2015 1:13 pm

Official short Review

Well, there's a bad atmosphere, like some cutoffs, bad ice tileset graphics etc., but I don't find this level awful whatsoever. It has lots of efforts added. There's an ice gimminick with switches, and... it's very interesting. I enjoyed playing this very much, solving puzzles is fun and the gameplay balances fine. The music fits good. The first half takes about puzzles, while the second takes about the boss, which is tough, at least there's a midpoint before it. There's nothing to say more about it, it's pretty interesting level with many graphical flaws it has.

5/10


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