Cloudy Carrots

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Cloudy Carrots

Postby Witchking666 » Sun Oct 11, 2015 5:37 am

hey people
this is meant to be just a generic athletic level, so it has less gimmicks then i usually design with
it will also be in Super Mario Bros: Bowser's Annihilation
it is completely made of carrots so that explains the name

and for those who didnt knew it allready from my cheese level
the green star is a checkpoint

here is screenie
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Totally no download link whatsoever

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Re: Cloudy Carrots

Postby Darkonius Mavakar » Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:21 am

Oh hey it's veggie platforming all over again.
Seems nice, i might try it out.

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Re: Cloudy Carrots

Postby Valentine » Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:26 am

REVIEW OF CLOUDY CARROTS BY WITCHKING666

NPC PLACEMENT
In parts of the level (Especially the first section) there were some pretty cheaply placed NPCs and the super koopas that are mostly harmless which isn't all that great. There's also a dragon coin that i have no idea how to reach because of the way you did it and that might be a problem for people who want to have all the dragon coins, also what's the purpose of the red coins exactly? I didn't see anything that they did for me. But otherwise, in the other sections it's pretty nice.

OVERALL DESIGN
The overall design is pretty nice actually. The scrolling section plays pretty nice but the autoscroll could stand to be a bit faster. The second section is also good, there aren't really any negative things about it other than the dragon coin i noted in the first part of the review. The red coin section doesn't really make sense to me as nothing in the level changes. The third section is good and the star section is good.

SCORE:
8.5/10

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Re: Cloudy Carrots

Postby Witchking666 » Sun Oct 11, 2015 7:07 am

Frozen Boo wrote:what's the purpose of the red coins exactly? I didn't see anything that they did for me.


if you collect all 8 of them, a secret star appears
but i maybe should have placed a sign there because it is explained in "peach castle" of my episode
so there is no way you could have known


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