Desert Thwomp Ruins

[Man1234FK]

Hey! So i decided to try making a desert level and here it is!

Download Link:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/lnmesbwkty9s3 ... s.zip?dl=0

Screenshots!

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Desert Thwomp Ruins Pic 1.png

Desert Thwomp Ruins Pic 2.png

Desert Thwomp Ruins Pic 3.png

Updates!
-Ruin walls are now darker
-More coins, little less enemies
-Other minor changes
-Got rid of cutoff

Credits for the graphics are in the folder!

Thanks to LordYoshi999 and glitch4 for the reviews, very much appreciated!

[LordYoshi999]

Ill probably play this and review it after!
Sorry for being late but I'm being rushed.

It could have used more coins in some parts, around the start, it also could had a little bit less enemies in some parts.
Anyways, I love the design of the level actually! It's a nice length and has some decent little secrets, though I think you could have done more in underground area. Also, whats with the SMB3 hills in a desert? I know they have a recolor, but it still looks too green, maybe make it yellow? Idunno i'm not good with recoloring. And uh, the cactus's are kinda floating, put them just a little bit in the ground.

Rating:
6.73/10

Last Note:
bushes are ugly.

[Alagirez]

Judging for the screens, the square block looks decent and good design. I suggest you darken the background pyramid BGO (2nd screen) because it looks same with the tiles and it confuse me.

[Man1234FK]

Ill probably play this and review it after!
Sorry for being late but I'm being rushed.

It could have used more coins in some parts, around the start, it also could had a little bit less enemies in some parts.
Anyways, I love the design of the level actually! It's a nice length and has some decent little secrets, though I think you could have done more in underground area. Also, whats with the SMB3 hills in a desert? I know they have a recolor, but it still looks too green, maybe make it yellow? Idunno i'm not good with recoloring. And uh, the cactus's are kinda floating, put them just a little bit in the ground.

Rating:
6.73/10

Last Note:
bushes are ugly.

Thank you for the review! I'll add some coins ad fix other problems ASAP!

Also, Harvey, good point, ill do that aswell!

[LordYoshi999]

Ill probably play this and review it after!
Sorry for being late but I'm being rushed.

It could have used more coins in some parts, around the start, it also could had a little bit less enemies in some parts.
Anyways, I love the design of the level actually! It's a nice length and has some decent little secrets, though I think you could have done more in underground area. Also, whats with the SMB3 hills in a desert? I know they have a recolor, but it still looks too green, maybe make it yellow? Idunno i'm not good with recoloring. And uh, the cactus's are kinda floating, put them just a little bit in the ground.

Rating:
6.73/10

Last Note:
bushes are ugly.

Thank you for the review! I'll add some coins ad fix other problems ASAP!

Yup! i'll be sure to review your next level when it comes out!

[Man1234FK]

Ill probably play this and review it after!
Sorry for being late but I'm being rushed.

It could have used more coins in some parts, around the start, it also could had a little bit less enemies in some parts.
Anyways, I love the design of the level actually! It's a nice length and has some decent little secrets, though I think you could have done more in underground area. Also, whats with the SMB3 hills in a desert? I know they have a recolor, but it still looks too green, maybe make it yellow? Idunno i'm not good with recoloring. And uh, the cactus's are kinda floating, put them just a little bit in the ground.

Rating:
6.73/10

Last Note:
bushes are ugly.

Thank you for the review! I'll add some coins ad fix other problems ASAP!

Yup! i'll be sure to review your next level when it comes out!

Ha, thanks!

[glitch4]

Review of Desert Thwomp Ruins by Man1234FK

Well, that was a simple SMB3 desert level. The level design was pretty good and not flat. The graphics look good, the music fits okay, and the atmopshere was fine. Some gameplay parts are tricky, like that parakoopa in the end of the level without quicksand. xD There is nothing interesting in this level, still. I think there's some cutoffs with desert BGOs in the second half of the level:




For me, there's nothing to say that much in this. The platform riding section was kinda fun. For the gameplay, it was a bit short and not that difficult. Other than that...

Good:
- Graphics
- Atmosphere
- Music fit
- Nice design

Bad:
- Cutoff
- No interests.
- Gameplay is a bit short.

7/10

[Man1234FK]

Review of Desert Thwomp Ruins by Man1234FK

Well, that was a simple SMB3 desert level. The level design was pretty good and not flat. The graphics look good, the music fits okay, and the atmopshere was fine. Some gameplay parts are tricky, like that parakoopa in the end of the level without quicksand. xD There is nothing interesting in this level, still. I think there's some cutoffs with desert BGOs in the second half of the level:




For me, there's nothing to say that much in this. The platform riding section was kinda fun. For the gameplay, it was a bit short and not that difficult. Other than that...

Good:
- Graphics
- Atmosphere
- Music fit
- Nice design

Bad:
- Cutoff
- No interests.
- Gameplay is a bit short.

7/10

Thanks for the review! I know there's cutoff, but I didn't find any other way to make the ruins look good :/

[underFlo]

You could use Custom Graphics that have those pixels that cause cutoff edited out.

[Man1234FK]

You could use Custom Graphics that have those pixels that cause cutoff edited out.

Where can i find those?

[RudeGuy]

You could use Custom Graphics that have those pixels that cause cutoff edited out.

Where can i find those?

You can just make them yourself. You could take the desert top block (or whatever it's called) and make it replace a BGO.

[Man1234FK]

You could use Custom Graphics that have those pixels that cause cutoff edited out.

Where can i find those?

You can just make them yourself. You could take the desert top block (or whatever it's called) and make it replace a BGO.

Well now i feel dumb XD Yeah, i'll do that! Thanks!

[super stage maker]

Can I use your stage for my game???

[Man1234FK]

Can I use your stage for my game???

If you credit me, then sure!

[Witchking666]

Can I use your stage for my game???

Uhhm
maybe you should learn how to make your own levels instead of begging everyone on the forums for their levels

[AsrieluciDreamer]

Can I use your stage for my game???

Uhhm
maybe you should learn how to make your own levels instead of begging everyone on the forums for their levels

Or maybe start a collaborative project...