Postby Muyoko » Wed Jun 29, 2016 11:39 am
Ehhh? I've seen worse.
Generally speaking though...
1) Your characters need more structure. Try molding a base using circles to round your characters up so they look more natural. Also, make sure you measure your arms and legs so that they aren't shorter or larger than the head. As with the faces, generally speaking, having a pronounced nose is okay, but having a sharp nose can only take you so far. Try rounding your noses in some of your images to prevent same-face. Teeth are also not supposed to be jagged/pointy or flat all around. I recommend you look at some anatomy books or look into getting a mannequin to pose your characters. That will make your art stand out better.
2) The colors in some of your images are too bright. If you are doing flat colors, try to mute your colors by using an opacity of 5%-15% of a different color (preferably the complementary color to the color you are using) to make your colors not be eye-strain inducing. If you are interested in shading, try to follow this steps on shades and tints.
3) I am not sure if you're a troll or not so if you are, please improve your Photoshop/PainttoolSAI/SketchbookPro skills (if you have any of these programs) and try to at least blend Bill Cosby's face onto Kirby correctly. If you want your work to be believable, using the blending tool will save your life. If you are just using MS Paint, don't bother trying to do edits, since it'll only make your edits suffer if you only use MS Paint.
I hope you take my criticisms with consideration.