SMW - The Betrayal of Bowser (REVEAL PROJECT!)

[Ethereality]

Thanks for making logo by me

History:
A few years ago, Mario go on vacation. Suddenly, a UFO entered the Island of the Dinosaurs and the UFO captured Peach and permanent disappeared. Oh no! Peach was gone. Help find Peach. It was a day very terrible.

Features:
An SMW-styled graphics
Custom bosses
A classic adventure reminds to SMW.

Screenshots:



Beta-testers (up to 5)
-Alex48
-Rawr
-Superiorstar
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Any comments/suggestions/criticisms/feedback.

Credits:

Valtteri
SMW Central
Nintendo

Userbar (NEW!)



Also, happy 100th post!

[Murphmario]

That story has some Engrish, like "the Peach". Otherwise, nothing too special.

The graphics and screens look nice; not many errors as far as I can tell.

[Destiny]

I bet you're gonna cancel this project like you did with the thousand others. But well, let's see how long this will last.

Those screens look nice... that's all I can say for now.

[HenryRichard]

That story has some Engrish, like "the Peach".

They're looking for a peach that they lost. Why they can't go to the supermarket and buy a new one is beyond me.
The recolored graphics look pretty nice, and the design looks fine.

[Snowburger]

This is all right.Some small cutoffs,nothing too bad.But it will probably get cancelled...

[Destiny]

This is all right.Some small cutoffs,nothing too bad.But it will probably get cancelled...

There isn't any cutoff.

[Squishy Rex]

I bet you're gonna cancel this project like you did with the thousand others. But well, let's see how long this will last.

Those screens look nice... that's all I can say for now.

Firstly, that was kind of rude and unnecessary. Please refrain from making those sorts of comments in future. Secondly, what is it that you like/don't like. "They look nice" only tells the creator so much, please be a little more constructive next time.

This is all right.Some small cutoffs,nothing too bad.But it will probably get cancelled...

The same goes for you Snowburger, the author's track record should be being brought up by other users. The cut-off you speak of is also just the placing of two separate screens of the same level next to each other.

This project does look extremely nice so far though. Judging by the screens I almost thought it was a SMW Hack for a minute. I like the overworld level the most of the two, The colour combinations actually look really pleasing to the eye and overall it feels like it's a SMW level. The same I think could be said for the cave level. The green is a unusual choice, but it works. Despite it being a cave, it could use a few BGOs. Valtteri's GFX Pack has a cool selection of cave BGOs perfect for SMW levels. Good luck with your project Kasami!

[silent_]

The background in the first screen hurts my eyes; try making it a little darker. Either way, it doesn't match the tileset much. Otherwise, looks okay so far. Nothing too special. Maybe try to make your levels more than "go from the left screen to the right screen".

[Ethereality]

Thanks for the comments, the color indicates saturation and hue is improved. Do not worry! I will improve the level design. Of course!

Here the screenshots:




About the project is impressive, because a few days ago. If you did the NPCs are good.

[Ethereality]

DOUBLE POST!

New logo is updated, contains custom font Super Mario World belongs to BMatSantos.

Here the screenshot logo:

[Navi]

This project is interesting, and those are good recolors.
I'll beta test.

[HenryRichard]

DOUBLE POST!

New logo is updated, contains custom font Super Mario World belongs to BMatSantos.

Here the screenshot logo:

I thought it needed a shadow. please use this version

[Ethereality]

I've updated the new logo, but with shadows.

Here is the new logo:



Thanks for the reviews! I wait for you!

[Ethereality]

DOUBLE-POST!

Great news!
I changed the name of the episode "Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal Bowser!" Still already changed the player YI graphics.

Here the update screenshot:



Also, I modified the new logo, look at this:



Please remember to comment and feedback!

[bossedit8]

I really like your Project so far. Your screenshots Looks very nice for a regular SMW themed Level and for sure it's unique for having Bumpty as the main character instead of always be regular Mario. Looking Forward to your future work on this Project.

[Ethereality]

2 months ago, This project is not dead! I decided to make a background HDMA is easier.

Here is the screenshot:

[Superiorstar]

Man, I hope you finish this project.

[Navi]

I love the background's colours.

[Murphmario]

The story still has instances of "the Peach". You should fix that.

[Ethereality]

I updated the story fixed in my project in first post. I think the grammar of story is good. No problem.